My teddy is Elmo, but he isn't in a window, he is on a swing! Elmo is red with BIG eyes and a bright orange nose. He likes to swing around a lot when it’s windy, one time it was SO windy that he spun all the way around and back again. He feels a bit wiry, but really cuddly. He smells like nature because he’s always outside. He is a nice teddy.
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Friday, April 17, 2020
My Teddy
My teddy is Elmo, but he isn't in a window, he is on a swing! Elmo is red with BIG eyes and a bright orange nose. He likes to swing around a lot when it’s windy, one time it was SO windy that he spun all the way around and back again. He feels a bit wiry, but really cuddly. He smells like nature because he’s always outside. He is a nice teddy.
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Hi Minttu, What a great job of describing Elmo. I like the use of the word wiry. He looks very bright! Have you had Elmo for a long time? Where abouts is Elmos swing? Is it outside? Fantastic work.
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